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your smile lingers like smoke; hovering gently in the corners of my eyes where everything gets a bit blurry
reminders of our love shared between small smiles and bitten lips and everything else wait for me in the night -
lay waiting between dirty sheets, plaited into the steam of my shower
and you look at me, now, with eyes that tell the sad story
of two broken people
just trying to fix themselves
and i realise that maybe


we are just passing hands, lingering for slightly too long
as the feeling of gentle fingertips caressing is absorbed -
the feeling of knowing that there is something out there
something worth our time
im drunk and i shouldn't be writing

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sasunaru16 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
amazing :love:
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Aw thank you! :heart:
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Otakunojutsu Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Great emotion
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
thank you!
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AshMashTheFlash Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last bit is my favorite! Love the emotion, as always.
I do not think there is a time when you should not be writing- especially if you're going to come up with things like this. Truly love your work.
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Haha thank you so much! Felt a bit stupid writing whilst drunk, but yeah it's not too bad when I look at it now :heart:
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Turquoiseboots Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
"We are just passing hands, lingering for slightly too long"
my favourite part (:
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
mine too ;)
:heart:
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