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you became the sea

dark and deep you were,
ferocious monster. your
surface glowing red and
orange against the dark
horizon, you sigh, slow
waves gently caressing
the skin of the earth

small lives were lived
within yours; laughing,
you carry the ashes of
the dead, and the eyes
of the young. as you go
on, and on, and on, we
sit quietly and watch
as you tear at the seams
of this earth, untamed
snarls ripping at our
feet, your white bubbles
brining home those who
were gone, and stealing
those who were never lost
i love the ocean too much
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Mai-Love Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   Artist
That's pretty.
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Thank you!
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Your amazing work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Aw gosh, thank you so much!
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
You're welcome.
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AlterEgo1629 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, the ocean is a wonderful muse.
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Indeed it is :heart:
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ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
it's beautifully depressing. or depressingly beautiful. or both.
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rachel-rhapsody Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Haha, wouldn't one necessarily imply the other?
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itselliegasp Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this ones purdy <3
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