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you became the sea

dark and deep you were,
ferocious monster. your
surface glowing red and
orange against the dark
horizon, you sigh, slow
waves gently caressing
the skin of the earth

small lives were lived
within yours; laughing,
you carry the ashes of
the dead, and the eyes
of the young. as you go
on, and on, and on, we
sit quietly and watch
as you tear at the seams
of this earth, untamed
snarls ripping at our
feet, your white bubbles
brining home those who
were gone, and stealing
those who were never lost
i love the ocean too much
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:iconmai-love:
That's pretty.
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dreamsinstatic Aug 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Your amazing work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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:iconrachel-rhapsody:
Aw gosh, thank you so much!
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dreamsinstatic Aug 5, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome.
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AlterEgo1629 Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, the ocean is a wonderful muse.
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:iconchloroformboy:
it's beautifully depressing. or depressingly beautiful. or both.
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:iconrachel-rhapsody:
Haha, wouldn't one necessarily imply the other?
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itselliegasp Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this ones purdy <3
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